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He rode their tandem bike, alone.
Just some words.
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Given 2012-11-11
Things Change by ~NoQuestions The suggester writes, "This is so simple, but so effective. The image it calls up in six words is striking." ( Suggested by SilverInkblot and Featured by thorns )
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
just some words...these words became DD material...just how....is it done?
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconsilverinkblot:
SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know I've featured this piece in my 2012 showcase of literature: [link] :D
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:iconsoaring-heart:
soaring-heart Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
wow i was really impressed by this piece of art you draw a scene and delivered a whole message and put a lot of meaning in six simple words
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:iconwdnest:
wdnest Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Writer
Wonderful = gets message across
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:iconwdnest:
wdnest Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Writer
Just read some of the comments on this DD - there is a lot of visual art chosen for a DD but not so much quick and short sayings such as this - small poems and sayings should be represented more
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012   Writer
agreed, especially when they speak so much with little words effectively
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:iconwdnest:
wdnest Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Writer
It is difficult to condense ideas in such a way. I congratulate the writer on this
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:iconchsehd41:
chsehd41 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
I wish that I'd written that. (Six words also, but.......).
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:iconsitsu-96:
Sitsu-96 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
I adore it, the pure simplicity is the strength of it. Such a message in so little words. Wonderful work, awesome DD.
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:iconsimplysilent:
SimplySilent Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Fantasic!
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:iconsteffenc-itsjustme:
SteffenC-itsjustme Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's sad..I wish I couldn't relate to it as much as I can right now.

¤sigh¤ Tandem bikes can be quite..awesome.

Great short poem.
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:iconc-jackline-m:
C-Jackline-M Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Simple but effective. I like that. C:
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:iconradenwa:
RadenWA Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Singular they?
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:iconanonymous771:
anonymous771 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
It's nice, but I can't see how this got a daily deviation.
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:iconxxxkid:
xxxKid Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Because they need literature deviations and no one likes to read? :P
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:iconthorns:
thorns Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012   Writer
Because it's a quality example of micro fiction. (And I do love to read.) :)
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:iconwheretostart:
WhereToStart Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Writer
Lol, probably true.

Plus, it's a lot more time consuming to shift through the bad poetry and short fiction than it is to sort through the bad pictures and drawings.
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theoutcast15 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Very good piece- reminds me of the classic "shortest sad story" (For Sale. Baby Shoes. Never Worn). Short, (bitter)sweet, and to the point. Well done.
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:iconalshvarin:
Alshvarin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Amazing short story. I doubt, as with the work above, wether any greater amount of words could transmit the same message and intensity of feeling.
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:iconjoemerl:
JoeMerl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Writer
So few words, so much angst.

...Oh, look, now you've got me doing it. :XD:
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:iconalshvarin:
Alshvarin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Very appropriate comment, sir.
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:iconekanamotenjen:
EkanamoTenjen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
just... wow
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:iconsephinta:
Sephinta Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a powerful message for a mere 6 words.

Wow.
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:iconxxanemia:
XXAnemia Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
wow!! You're very talented to create such a strong image with 6 words
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:iconmaplefang:
Maplefang Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow. Just wow.
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:iconrion-the-fox:
Rion-The-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I almost want to apologize...

This is so extremely powerful and shaking that it just makes emotions bubble to the surface.
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:iconlordonyx13:
lordonyx13 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconidontknowplz: that whas the most amaysing 6 words iv read in my life
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:iconfaraleigh:
Faraleigh Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Writer
Gorgeous. :blowkiss: It reminds me of Hemingway. I've always wanted to take a shot at a six word story but I've just never had the inspiration to do it. Perhaps some day, though. I can do a lot with a lot of words, but this is a challenge unto itself...
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:iconwei-en:
wei-en Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
A lifetime of emotion in six words.
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:iconjeenso:
Jeenso Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
The 6 words create a picture, which is a 1000 more words. c: I love this!
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:icone-hima:
e-hima Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
YES.
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:iconafinewar:
AFineWar Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:tears:
Congratulations on your Daily Deviation :clap:
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Velociraptor78 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
This reminds me of that six-word story Ernest Hemingway wrote; "For sale; baby shoes, never worn." So many meanings in both, so many questions.
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:iconsilvermoose:
Silvermoose Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
That was great.
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:iconsonicsis:
sonicsis Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
right in the feels
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:iconderaza360:
DeRaza360 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my...
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:iconreplicka:
Replicka Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
... ouch.
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:iconshinragod:
shinragod Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Minimalism when worded correctly can say so much. And this confirmation of loneliness through a change in a relationship proves it.
If means a lot to me because in my own personal life: change was never a positive.
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:iconmisterdatt:
MisterDatt Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww ;u;
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:icontehmagicaltoaster:
TehMagicalToaster Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
WoW O_O <3
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:iconduckfluff:
duckfluff Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful six-word story.
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:iconfyrequeen89:
FyreQueen89 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Wow. Just, wow. :clap:
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:iconfartprincess:
fartprincess Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Writer
How hauntingly beautiful.
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how many possibilities this opens. Definitely wondering why he's alone :P
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:iconamaterasu-luv:
amaterasu-luv Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
Right through the feels.

Such power in such few words, good job!
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:iconsweetkeydani:
SweetKeyDani Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww....this makes me sad...
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:iconryuu-chou:
Ryuu-chou Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
-hugs- :huggle:
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:iconsweetkeydani:
SweetKeyDani Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs back* :huggle:
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:iconryuu-chou:
Ryuu-chou Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
:iconiloveyouplz:
your icon! °-°
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